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School Girl by Count2pacula School Girl by Count2pacula
The classic school girl uniform. I think it turned out pretty good.

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XxNERUxLENxX Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
I'm no pro, in fact I suck at drawing xD But you made the torso and shoulders a little too broad and stiff. The torso should connect evenly with the lower body (hip and legs I mean). Since you made the torso so stiff, it doesn't look natural. But, don't worry. It's a common mistake that can easily be fixed ! Practice makes perfect, kay?
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Count2pacula Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yeah, thanks
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XxNERUxLENxX Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Welcomes xP
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September 8, 2012
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Apple
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iPhone 4S
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1/30 second
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F/2.4
Focal Length
4 mm
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64
Date Taken
Sep 9, 2012 12:06:54 AM -06:00
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