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just a random eye drawing...I find I'm better with pencil. What do you think?
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FOREWARNING; The concept of drawing an eye is a concept that denies the score "Originality", and therefore, I request that you leave it out of the score. :I
The layout of this piece is more like a statue than a being. The eyebrow, for one, can be inverted visually! It's quite odd, and I doubt that's what you were going for, but it adds to the statue-ness, as you'll see.
The eye is my favorite part, for sure. (OF COURSE. :P) The shading is Quite excellent, adding depth to that crazy, crazy eye. It looks almost LIKE IT WAS SET IN STONE. (EH? Eh?)
But the structure is a bit off. See, the tear ducts are a bit larger, and eyes are NAHT just eliiptic circles. They are longer on one side, the side being determined by ethnicity and whatnot.
See, overall, it reveals that you DO have potential. HWerew that lies is unclear, for the shading could've been a skill you already possessed. :I I give it a 7.5/10. :D
What do you think?
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Submitted on
August 7, 2012
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Apple
Model
iPhone 4S
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1/20 second
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F/2.4
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4 mm
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125
Date Taken
Aug 7, 2012 10:29:17 PM -06:00
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